SUPERMARKET
When i was a boy Mum asked me do you
Want to come to the supermarket
With me. I said
Do i have to
Mum said yes
I said fine if i have to
We got there
I said i'll stay in the car
Mum said fine
We got there
Mum said i'll be
One minute
I say fine
And i see mum
Walk into the supermarket
I think to myself
How long does
It take to buy stuff
It's feeling like ages
I was looking out
Of the car window
And i saw a
Tone of cars go
Past my window
By now i thought
Where is she
Buying a lot of stuff.
By Stanley.
Hello Stanley,Its Angel here from Grey Main School I LOVE the way that you put all these facts in your story about going to the supermarket. My mum has done the same thing to me one time. Maybe next time you do a blog post like this you could read your sentences and make them make scene.
ReplyDeletekind regards Angel : ) : ) :) :) :)