Friday 23 June 2017

literacy week 8


This is my character description we did this for week 8 literacy. My WALT was to use interesting vocabulary. I did mine on my cousin Burty. He is very sporty and he is my favorite cousin because he is very nice. He is fun to play with. He does sailing for a sport and he is really good at it. He taught me how to windsurf on a big board.
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  1. Anonymous23 August 2017 at 09:43

    Hey there my name is Chloe I really like how you character likes sailing !! do you like sailing or have you been sailing because I went for a school thing. just saying my name is Chloe I go to yaldhurst model school

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  2. Anonymous23 August 2017 at 10:28

    I have improved my comment from the one before. Hey there my name is Chloe I really like how you character likes sailing ! why would you chose sailing over lots of over other sports ! do you like sailing or have you been sailing because I went for a school thing. what's your favorite sport .please next time can you add more detail about sailing it would help alot. Was this hard to do . just saying my name is Chloe I go to yaldhurst model school.


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